AP World History DBQ essay

Below I have attached two DBQ essays for AP World History. Please do not accept this assignment if you do not know what a DBQ essay is, as I have posted this question twice already and have not been satisfied at all with the answer. I have attached a document on how to write a DBQ essay, as well as the requirements/rubric needed, as well as a sample essay from the AP exam that got full marks. In addition to this, I have attached notes from my teacher about what needs to be included well in the essay.