Article Analysis College Isn’t All It’s Cracked Up to Be Essay

This is the link of the article…

I have done the second draft and I want to you help me rewrite it.

The target audience is Government and you can focus on this part “College Isn’t All It’s Cracked Up to Be”

You can reseach the author and put a little information to make essay stronger

Hope you understand my guideline pics that I posted it . Also, I put my second draft on it.