just discuss about their topic and try to provide examples.
NO PLAGIARISM NO CITATION. Write them individually in one document. (5-7 sentence per feedback)
1. Topic 1: Overcoming adversity
Thesis: Not letting physical and mental struggles define you
3 or 4 Steps in Your Story and How They Support Thesis:
– Learning disabilities at a young age
– Medical issues
– Making something of myself regardless of what I’ve dealt with and am dealing with
Topic 1: Working Mom
Thesis: Not regretting being a working mother of two
3 or 4 Steps in Your Story and How They Support Thesis:
– My family
– What I am providing for them
– Going to college. I’m not done yet.
2. Topic 1 – Homeschooling
Thesis – Transferring from public school to a home school co-op was in no way easy, as I had to how to be more independent, make money, and learn time management. However, the benefits that came from it were exponentially greater than the labor required.
Points:
-How I found out I was going to be home schooled (and why)
-Describe the work required to make the transfer (obtaining documents, paying for school, getting in contact with people, etc.)
-Explain the independence required for home schooling compared to a traditional education
-Where I am now in my education and how I am better off
Topic 2 – First Driving Experiences
Thesis – My first time driving was both hilarious and scarring, yet it shows that it isn’t just the student, but the teacher who affects the learning experience.
Points:
-The nerves leading up to the drive and how my friend helped with that
-The well known difficulty of the teacher
-The struggles my partner faced while driving
-The several ridiculously stressful things my teacher has us do