ORIGINAL THOUGHTS ONLY
PLEASE FOLLOW MY INSTRUCTIONS AND PAY ATTENTION TO THE FEEDBACK*******
I HAVE ATTACHED THE ROUGH DRAFT*******
You have already developed your Working Thesis Statement, Outline, and Starting Draft. You’ve also received helpful feedback from your instructor. Now it’s time to create your Rough Draft in a new Word document. To do this, you will use the questions in each section below to fill in any missing information. You’ll also incorporate the feedback you received from your instructor. Your Word document should include two sections: 1.) Rough Draft and 2.) Feedback Reflection. It’s exciting to see how far your essay has come in just a few short weeks!
THIS IS THE FEEDBACK. I NEED A WORKING THESIS***Rahenda: Excellent start. Watch the video for my suggestions to make the draft due in week 7 better. Also, you need to clarify your thesis. Finally, you left out your working thesis and Feedback Reflection. If you want to redo this with these sections in it, for a higher grade, you can. -Dr S