Editing , I want you to some editing to my research paper

First, you need to read all the comments that my teacher provided to me , I will send you everything you need.

My teacher have provided me with some comments in my research paper , you need to do a revision for every comments that my teacher provide and do some change to make everything looks good. I want you to fix everything in my 10 pages essay. you need to highlighted everything that you add or change. I want you to some changes in my introduction and make sure that mostly everything in my research paper connect to the White class anger and how it shift Wisconsin from Democratic to Republican. I need a good cohesion and coherence. Do your best.

I just uploaded the research paper down below