PLEASE read annotated draft and then improve the paper in the second file. Keep writing.
I need specific quote from my previous draft (the 4th file) for every point that you improved during this quarter.
THE INTRO SHOULD INCLUDE FOUR PART (Please refer to prompt (3rd file) for details.)
1. Transferring What You Know (I take Political science 21A class in this quarter, and I have blue book exam.Through this course, I learned how to organize during the exam.)
2. Your Composing Process
3. Rhetoric, Argumentation, & Multi-modal Communication