Hunger in VA and the World

I wrote that essay last week. (1)Please help me revise it(not a new essay). there are teacher’s comment on the side. Please follow her comments fix the essay,(2) and there is a check list, please help me complete it .Thanks ! that work will due tonight. If the work is prefect I would like pay more on tip.

two assignment:1. fix the essay 2. complete check list