: provide comments in the margins

– Review the papers as I demonstrated in class: provide comments in the margins(2 Comments at least per page), a brief note at the end, and then complete the Peer-Review Worksheet, which can be found in the Files section of our Canvas page.

– Then, in a reply to your partner’s original post, attach your peer-reviewed copy of their intermediate draft.

*In each paper you should pay attention for 2 thing

For Shawnee paper:

Hello, I would like to see if my compromise/agreement between both stakeholders is clear. Also whether it’s understandable on what each stakeholders believes in. Lastly if my thesis is clearly noticeable in the introduction.

For Hamdan paper:


– sentence order.

Please Follow instructions carefully, and include 2 in text comments please. Thanks