Revise Essay for Middle East Sharia Law

This is my first draft, I need some extra touches and fixation. Please follow the comments written at the end of page. Last time I had to withdraw since the editor did not change anything. Please follow instructions. Essay thesis is very clear and just needs extra evidence/support. It is based on Islamic Sharia Law below should be how you organize the paragraphs with evidence.

  • gender segregations,
  • severe punishment,
  • social inequality.

Thank you!