rewrite the essay based on professor’s comments

Hi, do you remember the 3 page 1.5 margin essay you wrote for me?

I didn’t get a good grade on that, but the professor gave me a second chance to revise my essay based on his commands.

Please help me do well on the second chance to improve my grade!

I upload his commands in the zip file!

Also hope his commands about the first one can help you do better on the second 3 page 1.5 margin essay assignment I assigned you yesterday!