Please, who have seen the movie or read the book would understand me and hope you edit my essay.
I wanted a help to fix my argument essay following the notes that is written on the paper.
Please mention evidence in correct way and by giving more examples to show my argument right.
There is a paragraph that is not necessary on my paper so I crossed it. So go more deeper on my paper and show
” Why did Maxin and Gogal broke up “
Check the note that’s on my “3RD” page to write what is missing on my paper.
Please keep your writing at the same advance on my mine. Do not use too many difficult vocabularies make it simple showing the “ARGUMENT” right.
Important : Follow the main point , ” cultural differences of maxin’s and gogal’s break up”