write a five pages paper

Your final research paper is 5- 5 anf half pages long and should take an arguable position on one of the works we have read so far. You need to have 5-7 sources that you quote at least once, but some may be quoted more than once depending on need. You need to format your work according to MLA rules. You cannot use 1st person narrative in our essay. Quotes should be short and sweet, no more than one or two lines long, and as a very general rule, no more than one to two quotes per page. No interviews and no surveys. Your thesis statement (argument) guides the essay.

The topic I choose: John Winthrop- “A Model of Christian Charity”

I don’t know if you remember but on the last paper you did for me you made this thesis statement for this research paper I am telling you to do.

The thesis statement you make :There has been the argument that to start a new church, John came up with a “A Model of Christian Charity” Which acted as guideline on how to start a new church such that without these guidelines the new church would not have been successful, hence John was an essential symbol for the foundation of the new church such that without him the church would have failed completely.

You can use this thesis statement but my teacher left me some comments on it, she said ” There has been the argument that to start a new church, John came up with a “A Model of Christian Charity” Which acted as guideline on how to start a new church such that without these guidelines the new church would not have been successful, hence John was an essential symbol for the foundation of the new church such that without him the church would have failed completely. ” you can take that so you can fix the thesis statement.

What I need is a 5 pages paper. MLA format using that topic and the same thesis statement just fix whatever my teacher said about the thesis statement.