please fallow instruction in perentesis !!! FIX ESSAY,REWRITE IT AND ADD QUOTATIONS to support text!!! !!!Right now, you lack textual support in your paragraphs. There are no direct quotes in any of these paragraphs. That is what I assess. You have to go back and use the authors’ words in every paragraph. Find the ambiguous language that can be interpreted in different ways and then show me how to see those quotes in a way that supports your claims.!!!
