essay review 2

1.Read and review the ideas set forth about revision in Longman chapter 9

2. Read the paper

3. Leave in-text comments on the draft: 2 items per paragraph that deal with organization and content, 1 item per paragraph that deals with sentence structure and/or grammar

4. Answer in detail and in complete sentences each of the peer review questions on pages 132 and 133 of Longman textbook.