insert the sets of primary note cards after each appropriate two supporting sentences in each body paragraph. after that, make sure each inserted cards has 4-6 interpretative explanatory sentence following it immediately. the quotes thats I have written in the cards is attached.
(( you should be inserting the note cards at the end of each paragraph )) ( Please READ THE INSTRUCTIONS VERY VERY CLEARLY ).
Moreover, I have attached the essay and hou have to fix the essay.
It should be finished within 8 hours.